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Jul 12, 2011, 7:12:44 PM by ~mesmeric-revelation
Literature / Poetry / Human Nature / Free Verse

The best thing about you is that
you don't know how I got here and

I've never been more happy
to treat words politely.

O, writing, you are a
stranger-

but when he kissed me
it was like inhaling
after having your
head held under
water

and the electric inside
of me made a new
animal.

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~Self-Intoxication Feb 24, 2012

nice teeth!

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!UnderwaterAlienDance Jan 31, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Thank you for joining

I look forward to reading you work!

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~mesmeric-revelation Jan 30, 2012

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!aracari-aracari Oct 6, 2011 Hobbyist General Artist

where'd ya gooooo :c

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